All Comments on 'What I Think of You Pt. 08'

by JovialImplications

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This story is pretty good, but man, it really feels like Alice and Rachel have just evaporated from this story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love it, I hope Olivia doesn't become a bimbo though, just a slave

RomComDomRomComDom4 months ago

I love ot and hope you keep writing. I hope we se Olivia again (just submissive rather than fully bimbofied)

redknight77redknight774 months ago

Keep it up love it also your writing has gotten a lot better

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I’m really looking forward to the next part. I check your profile every day. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Super sa avance bien j ai hâte des prochain chapitre

JovialImplicationsJovialImplications4 months agoAuthor

Sorry for the longer-than-average delay, the next chapter has been submitted, and hopefully the following chapters won't have such a long delay. Next chapter should be published in the next day or so.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Je trouve cette histoire de mieux en mieux j aimerai quand même que Alex mette le collier léger à yoshiko et que sa confiance en lui envolue et même peut être que yoshiko pourrait lui offrir un autre fragment du dieu via la conquête à sa manière d une autre fille(porteuse de fragment)

Quoiqu il en soit continu auteur c super

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I'm an author who aims to specialize in a variety of mind-control and mind-control adjacent fiction, along with more niche theme's such as altered reality, and unintentional mind-control.

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