All Comments on 'What Just Happened? Ch. 11'

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zena99zena99over 3 years ago
Continues to impress

I only wish that I had an invite to this party

Edward1970Edward1970over 3 years agoAuthor

Glad you enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good Read

I look forward to new chapters. Really like the idea of this. Would love to see more interactions with his sister. A little confusing this chapter with names. I think you may have changed the names up on the women at the party a couple times which got confusing. Otherwise, a fun read as always. Looking forward to more chapters.

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