All Comments on 'What We Say in the Dark Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It feels like this story has become something of a bait and switch.

It began with a woman who was a budding cuckquean, with a cheating husband.

Now, she's a proto domme and the humiliation/cuckquean/submissive tendencies are being ignored in favor of pushing her into a femdom role.

It makes it much less enjoying to read when the story betrays its promise and takes a violent hard left turn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

there was less cbt and more of a story line. not the best

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