All Comments on 'What's Distance When You're in Me?'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lose the choking and youve got a great story

The choking was superflous and killed the flow of the story it a bit. Ive never met a woman who enjoys being choked or strangled during set ( or at any time!)

If you edit it to take out the two instanced os choking at the begining and the end then you'd have an excellent and very arousing story

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Hey you! I go by the name NoFaceGypsy and I am a firm lover of all things sexual and or erotic. I read, not nearly as much as I write but I am working on that. Let's be friends.