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All Comments on 'WildSpace - Voyage of the Naginata Ch. 03'

by MelanieShaman

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ArkingArkingabout 2 months ago

There is nothing better for a story than a sudden dramatic ending. You gave us that Melanie.

I am enjoying the ride through space and the battles. How 'Daddy Dearest' can make a sudden appearance and leave after giving the captain his blessing and another quest to fulfill.

{I have sent you a message.}

5 stars *****

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 months ago

Adventure simply gets better and better as the storyline and characters grow on us. I am hooked on pins and needles.

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Just a new writer, trying to express myself. Parts 1 and 2 of sisters have been rewritten and collected in part 1... parts 3 and 4 will be collected into part 2 soon. My blog http://beautiful-tragedy.flynnos.org/