All Comments on 'WildSpace - Voyage of the Naginata Ch. 04'

Oh wow, you do write so well. The story is captivating and the sex, oh my, so, so hot.

I am not sure if some of the words you are using to describe Il'taira such as a Psykik (Psychic) and Psionk (I don't know what this word is meant to mean?)

I did get an email from an anonymous source was it you reaching out to me?

Yeah, they are just different spellings. yes psychic... psyonic just another descriptor for the type of powers.

yes, that was me

This adventure so captivating, suspenseful, detailed and the character relationships, new and established, so intriguing. You are weaving a very exciting tale. As a near hopeless romantic … . We will see. In the meantime, may you enjoy a speedy and full recovery from surgery (though must say surgery on April 1 — just kidding). Be well.

This is an engaging story with endearing characters. I found myself wanting to skip sex scenes in order to get on with the story,

I've considered making rewriting this without the sex and doing more sci-fi/story stuff.