All Comments on 'Within the Family Ch. 03'

Still a bit chaotic writing, jumping back and forth, but let's see what happens?

1) Should Allan and Dean DP Mom? Yes

2) Should Jane be part of the action? Yes

Yes to both of your questions. I like where the story is going please keep it going.

Didn't need additional people in the sex before the siblings got popped. Really didn't need them at all.

Could do with a bit more length another page or so at least per chapter

Honestly your the storyteller the direction should be your choice

Could do with a bit more length another page or so at least per chapter

Honestly your the storyteller the direction should be your choice

Yes. And yes.

No to the DP

Jane and Dean only

No incest in this chapter. Angela is coming across as a cheating slut so far....

1-yes. 2-no.

I like it. Please continue. 5stars

Yes and yes

1-No

2-Yes

YES and YES

Yes and yes

yes and yes