All Comments on 'Yes Please Miss!'

At first glance tempted to by pass because of theme, but so glad that I did not and read — largely because you are a creative writer. Sex scene captures the connection between two characters both of whom are developed well enough to appreciate what is happening. Dialogue and introspective moments well done. Thought provoking.

Much appreciate the feedback Migbird, thoughtful and considered as ever x

That was a lot of fun. My degree of interest in the power play only really lasted up to the toilet stall, but I kept reading, because you write well (duh) and I was interested in your characters. The ring was a great touch. Thanks for sharing!

You're very welcome x