by Winter_Fare
That was a lot of fun. My degree of interest in the power play only really lasted up to the toilet stall, but I kept reading, because you write well (duh) and I was interested in your characters. The ring was a great touch. Thanks for sharing!
Much appreciate the feedback Migbird, thoughtful and considered as ever x
At first glance tempted to by pass because of theme, but so glad that I did not and read — largely because you are a creative writer. Sex scene captures the connection between two characters both of whom are developed well enough to appreciate what is happening. Dialogue and introspective moments well done. Thought provoking.