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by JupiterMars

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yowseryowserabout 2 years ago

Clever

A lot with a little, sweetly done.

'I wasn't married and at the end of class, he would no longer be my student.' How aware, and considerate....

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 2 years ago

Fun story and a good format for telling it in 750 words. Great job.

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I am a hobbyist writer slowly working my way through all of the story categories. I am trying different genres, different settings and different time periods. Constructive feedback always welcome.