All Comments on 'Your Kinky Girlfriend (bad ending)'

by Periquito1

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AngelRiderAngelRiderabout 2 months ago

New writers always write the most cliché nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good way to end it. I hate the stories where the guy has no way out, no one to turn to, and is forced to live with it. You also avoided clichés like him being a former navy seal or mma fighter, and jumps in the air round housing all three guys at once until they're toothless and unconscious. Good job.

consulting91consulting9121 days ago

I like that he was able to stand up for himself and not just take it. I would say that everyone ended up worse off with him lonely with trust issues and Mery realizing she through away something good and Hannah losing her friends.

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