by Sanzas
The use of corporal punishment and shaming in a high tech culture with a hierarchical caste system is an intriguing and interesting one and you write very well. But punishment sex is a "no" for me. Its non consent etc so Ive no complaints, great story, but the idea of sex as a punishment is not for me. Thanks for a fascinating story otherwise though.
“To be continued” The best possible phrase to see at the end of your story segments. Keep ‘em coming
@Gortmundy -Yeah, I do actually understand this. One of the reasons I wanted to really stress that this wasn't meant in a real-life actual context (which the reader would have), but the fantasy context of the story . . . but I yeah. I appreciate the feedback.
Your best work yet. Keep them coming. I love the inevitability of the punishments, and how the punishers are apologetic since it is a requirement of the company/state/culture!
Well I thought it was hot as hell personally. The public punishments and the punishment sex (of course in the context of fantasy) are super exciting.