Everyone should be required to read your piece before submitting a comment. I write for the joy of writing. I sometimes am a little thin skinned about the negative comments, especially those who don't have enough nerve to leave their names. I love you took the time and effort to write this. I just like other authors delete negative comments who are out there to just slam an article without being helpful. Thank You again for your submission!!
Back in the day when I took some writing classes, one of the most difficult things I learned was how to give constructive criticism without being hurtful. It is hard to underestimate how vulnerable a writer can be, putting her- or himself "out there". It is their story, their imagination, their talent on the line. The least we readers can be is respectful of the effort and labor of love. Writing is so much harder than it looks; really good writing is so rare. To the hypercritical, try it yourselves! To all writers out there, short of sloppiness, hats off to you for your guts and creativity.
Not only for the amateur writers like me, also for the experienced ones. Stories that depict realities are much more entertaining and closer to the heart or lovable.
I try and NEVER attack the writer. I may give my critique or an illustration, but never an attack on the writer himself and am saddened when I see that. I enjoy the type of stories I read too much to want the writer to become aggravated enough to stop. I'd even like to sign in, but as a novelist, I would much rather just stay anony-mouse...
This one is for the dumb commentors who obviously didn't read exactly what this was for, its a guide of sorts for helping people who are into the bdsm style. Seriously if you don't like it grow the hell up and go somewhere else.
This... this is weird giving feedback on a story about feedback. Bah, anyway.
I thought this was nicely phrased and touched on a lotta good points. It came off fair, reasonable, and very helpful. And what worked best for me was the parts about an author staying true and keeping identity. Taking the good and bad and finding what works for you.
It would due folks some good in my opinion to give this a read and soak in it for a bit.
Thanks for this bit about feedback, I always welcome feedback to my stories, whether is is positive or negative. I have had comments about my written conversations being stiff, I consider that a constructive comment. I have had comments deploring the readers loss of five minutes of their life to read my story.
Bottom line, if the comment is just a negative slam, with no redeeming qualities, I delete it, if it has some merit, I leave it.
for both the reader and the writer.
I think this insight could be applied in more situations as well. Great input. Thanks for sharing!!
Thank you for sharing your opinions with us; I hope every writer and aspiring writer will take your words to heart. It wouldn't hurt some readers to take a look at it, either.
This was a nicely done and well-written article, but I have refrained from voting on it.
By following these directions you have now found yourself back living with Mom and Pop. But your husband will be fine on that tropical cruise with his secretary!
I think this was just a joke from you, your English was so bad, that I couldn't read it, I know you normally write in readable English......ha ha......
"Lick you down along his body"...ha ha
" When you are down on your knees you glide over to the inside of the thighs and lick you from there up to the scrotum. Linger there and lick with big whirling movements on another ball at a time until he almost breaks of horniness."........ even funnier
"When you get a bobble with hand it's time to add the mouth - and let his hand serve as an extension of it. Then let his penis slide in and out of your mouth while your hand will follow."........lying on the floor now laughing and hurting my stomach
"Super Comfortable and lovely to see you both have the honor to see everything that happens."....oh you made my day.,.... guess you just had too much to drink when you were writing.......ha ha ha.....good one
Please reread the Option 2 at the end. You must have left off some words or something is amiss. Thanks for your suggestions.
Any suggestions as I am think my partner resists cumming and tries to push me awaywhen she gets close.
people shudder, windows have shutters.
While all of the above are not homonyms, they in general are not friends to those who rely on spell checkers as proof readers.
Enjoyable to read and even though I already knew all of this, it was very enjoyable to read through. The small humorous comments made this a very fun experience. Keep it up, man!! :-]
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