Total bullshit I dont care how hot my wife is or how sexually liberated she is if she fucks anyone besides me her husband she is fucking history when you get married you vow to forsake all others that means something to some people

Thanks for your supportive comments. They're much appreciated, as are all the 4s and 5s to date. The experience I mentioned, seeing girls suntanning topless on a roof below, is now in Exhibitionist and Voyeur, "Watching Great Tits from the Office". This short piece uses some humour, and the ending described in Literotica 101. You might like it.

I’m writing the full version of my 750 word ‘It wasn’t COVID’ story. I’m not as organized as you are, but it’s looking to be a million word story (not sure it if will really be a million, but it’s big). I’m enjoying letting the story take on a life of its own. I’m writing mostly on my iPad and rely heavily on Apple Notes to keep track of characters, places, things, milestones, the timeline, URL’s for bits of information I can use to add a touch of realism, etc. Plus, I can hyperlink between note cards for things that are related. It sync’s to iCloud so I have access to the notes on every one of my Apple devices.
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I’m writing in Google Docs sync’ing to Google Drive so I can change devices for writing and always have access to my originals. I suppose I could use Google Keep for notes, but the Apple version is better integrated.
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Periodically, I read my story from the beginning to make sure it still makes sense and to make sure there’s a believable line of ‘how I got here’.

One thing’s for certain: my brain really loves writing this monstrosity. Building my alternate reality is lots of fun and I don’t get tired of rereading it from the beginning.
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Then there’s {colorful metaphor}{colorful metaphor} people like you who plant things in my brain like “that’s a great idea!”. :-)
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Thanks for the essay.

Words to live by. Thank you!

What if thousands of marriages were really like this (scolding, nagging and blackmail)? What if thousands of wives are lying and manipulating in ways similar to this?
I saw a movie recently, "Barbie," and all the girls plot to deceive and manipulate all the boys.
I'm just an idiot, but what if this text is not "satire" but a documentary on how to blackmail the silliest and weakest men?
For the Reader: some sentences sound like they are taken from women's magazines like old school "Cosmopolitan." FYI, "men do NOT change," maybe they wear different types of clothes but they always remain the same in soul.
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For the author. In a few months there will be a Free Event on Literotica.com , "WIWWIW = Why I Write What I Write," and in my opinion, you really should participate.

Hopefully I'll marry a woman who wants to some of these (I'm not into watersports at all, just the idea is blah). Still, I'd have liked more emphasis on being a good husband also on an emotional level, as it can be very confusing as times (women are complex...)

I loved this story. I have wanted to eat my own cum for so long and have the same problem. Somehow, sometime I am going to eat it up myself.

I disagree you can use "CUUUUUMMMMIIIINNNGGG.....", but I would suggest only if your character is an actor playing the part of Frank-N-Furter and the story has reached the seduction scene with Brad and Janet.

Im not sure if anyone has pointed this out, but there are a lot of women who struggle with wetness way before menopause could be to blame. You are correct that orgasms typically bring at least a little wetness (depending on the woman), i just want to add some important things to keep in mind. Many factors contribute to a womens ability to self lubricate, including genes, hydration, partner attraction/comfort level, and whether or not the right spot is being stimulated.
With orgasms do come a little to a lot more wetness, but that doesn't mean if shes really enjoying herself she'll be wet right off the bat. Time and care can help, but lube isnt a bad thing. I think too many people associate lube with menopausal women but lube can be an incredibly helpful tool, and can actually ease her way to orgasm because it can eliminate any initial friction or discomfort. THE ONLY THING IS, i personally avoid water based lube because it's full of preservatives and chemicals for your body to absorb, and can make her dryer in the long run, not to mention they almost always dry up and get sticky within 5-10 minutes. Silicone lube is best as your body wont absorb the Silicone, making it last way longer. I recommend "wet platinum Silicone lube". Silicone lube is more expensive but you would only need one bottle for every 3 bottle of waterbased lube you use. **its longevity and minimal ingredients makes good quality Silicone the safest lube especially for butt stuff**

Sounds like he loved Dora more than his late wife.

Thanks for this. It's kind of like screen writing script writing techniques. I appreciate you taking the time to share this as i am struggling to write my own story. This is a handy reminder to simplify and be clear.

great start, interesting approach.

Many thanks! I always enjoy the insight authors provide, particularly the articulate ones. As I work towards the courage of writing and posting, I'll be sure to reference this work several times! Appreciate your efforts.

Thanks for this. Not only much good advice but a real incentive to keep writing. (which I have slacked off on). Had I read this before publishing my first story it would have turned out much differently in so many ways. (I've got a 4.18 on it) I have bookmarked this story to use as reference and guarantee I will be rereading it before publishing any other works. It's nice to see an author with so many H's giving back.

Thank you, @subdudeme13, @Wrstkrfft, and #Excoach for reading, enjoying, and commenting!! 🥰