I seem to be a bit dull today - but I don't understand this. The poem starts out sounding universally...
I love what you did with the language, but I didn't get the car connection until reading the other comments....
ignore the arrow, trust me, you know the way my mind works
zero in on these two lines:
led away to the...
reminds me of my gone down piece, a sense of loss/despair
Beautiful piece that gets a lot across in a few short lines. Great imagery. Very well done!
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