you've given me food for thought and an itchy head :)
the last line felt right at the time, but i can...
thanks twelve for the recommendation of invisible man, not this piece. oops :o
it certainly seems to have issues i didn't think about before submitting. perhaps a title change, less...
in this instance, i felt the ings stretched out the words, the feeling of the strained reaching... not...
I thought he subject matter was depicted very well and the carousel analogy worked too, I enjoyed the...
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