THIS poem IS a pile of scrap alright.
forever looking, wishing and hoping, TK U MLJ LV NV
When cats haz chezburgers
2nd stanza is all kinds of clunky
4th makes the poem the poem.
You are asking questions in the first three stanzas. Snip 'Or' from L4 or explain why it is necessary...
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