Wow, such a great story -- the first that I've read that described both the reality and excitement of hot sex over seventy. Please either continue this with a sequel or else a new story with different senior characters. Wish I could give it six stars!
ANOTHER BORING STORY OF AN OVER SIZED COCK, THAT HAS BEEN DONE SO MANY TIMES IT NOT FUNNY, COME ON POSTER'S WRITE SOME STORIES WITH NORMAL COCKS AND TITS.
Why do we love to laugh at the miseries of others??? Even those we love. One of life's unexplained mysteries. I echo the previous commenters, this is really funny!
10 Big Blazing Stars - There is only one solution for this situation. A .45 ACP 230 grain hardball between the eyes of the wife and her black lover. That is the only thing that could ever make this right. Everything else is Baloney. Buster2U
"shinny-black satin..." WTF is shinny-black", no spell-chequer I've used would ever accept that. ANF a few lines later: ..." shear-black,"... only sheep get sheared & what's wise, you used "sheer-black" just a few lines earlier.
I apologize for being such an SGN* here, but to those of us who learned spelling, grammar, & punctuation in the 50s & 60s this sort of things is like fingernails-on-a-blackboard. B out really spoils the flow of an otherwise-good story.
PS please keep sharing your imagination with us regardless of the SGN whiners like me [G,D,RLH] ** I do enjoy your stories
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Very nice sex and well written.
Wow, such a great story -- the first that I've read that described both the reality and excitement of hot sex over seventy. Please either continue this with a sequel or else a new story with different senior characters. Wish I could give it six stars!
quite satisfying to see someone punch an incubus in the face, honestly
Great story...it was a fun read from start to finish. Keep up the good work.
Love this character and your writing. Please keep it going
TOTAL BULLSHIT, NO SCHOOL IS ALLOWED TO TEACH SEX USING LIVE MODELS
ANOTHER BORING STORY OF AN OVER SIZED COCK, THAT HAS BEEN DONE SO MANY TIMES IT NOT FUNNY, COME ON POSTER'S WRITE SOME STORIES WITH NORMAL COCKS AND TITS.
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Great story 5 stars. the best name " Hillaria Clintoris.". Hats off to you.
Why do we love to laugh at the miseries of others??? Even those we love. One of life's unexplained mysteries. I echo the previous commenters, this is really funny!
10 Big Blazing Stars - There is only one solution for this situation. A .45 ACP 230 grain hardball between the eyes of the wife and her black lover. That is the only thing that could ever make this right. Everything else is Baloney. Buster2U
"Why don't you get that Vlasic surgery?"
"Vlasic is a pickle. You mean lasik?"
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Fucking gold. You are a great author.
There’s a dishwasher trap?!?
Humorous… design meetings haven’t changed much even after all these billions of years…
Stupid typo whines... on p.1
"shinny-black satin..." WTF is shinny-black", no spell-chequer I've used would ever accept that. ANF a few lines later: ..." shear-black,"... only sheep get sheared & what's wise, you used "sheer-black" just a few lines earlier.
I apologize for being such an SGN* here, but to those of us who learned spelling, grammar, & punctuation in the 50s & 60s this sort of things is like fingernails-on-a-blackboard. B out really spoils the flow of an otherwise-good story.
PS please keep sharing your imagination with us regardless of the SGN whiners like me [G,D,RLH] ** I do enjoy your stories
* Spelling & Grammar Nazi
** https://lmddgtfy.net/?q=g,d,r