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katie

ok, do they tell the kid that her mother is a cheating whore and that her stepfather and real dad are whoremongers?or do they keep the kid in the dark about their open marriage?If the kid knows all this, she is being taught it is ok to go out and fuck anything she wants even if she gets married. maybe you should have posted this in swinging section.I didn't see any humor in the story. gave it 3 stars

I never noticed but...

As a bi female... Alot of women who are lucky enough to have multiple orgasms... Tend to sound like they are reading the Necronomicon... Anyone else get that? Or should I just call the local exorcist? Thoughts?

Pretty funny stuff

A mishmash of several current and past TV shows, all taken with a grain of salt. But I didn't like the ending. It would have been much better if he had applauded Amanda and Sylvia as they left the stage, turned around and left himself, announcing to Chet that he had an appointment in Amsterdam to keep and he didn't want to be late! After all, he never wanted to be married in the first place. Why marry two bitches and become a third wheel in their lesbian roundhouse when the world is available? Besides, if they're lesbians, they don't have any use for a man. Funny story. Not a good ending.

Ugh!

This is sick! Get help!

Funny

Probably not reality, but still funny.

Sez who!

Says who! I traveled forward in time to read 02. Steven Hawking indeed!

Where do you come up with this shit?

Everytime i read a story that has me laughing so hard, that my cats think I might be rabid... I look to see who wrote it.... 9 times out of 10, its you. You are bizarre and I love it... I, not to sound too creepy, just want to climb in your ear and just roll around in your squishy brain meat... Uh... Just take a compliment and don't think too much into that... Keep up the good work!

Parody

What world is the writer living in.

Humor?

It's more satire, I appreciate the input. Thanks

Strange product, but v. Intetesting.

Seems like a first chapter.
Hope it is the first of a few. Looking forward to it hmmnmm

This story was great!

I liked another of your stories, I just read, a little better, because it was so damned funny! I laughed until my sides are sore!
Last person who made me laugh that hard, was years ago, watching Bob Hope on stage, doing his monologue!
But this story, is very funny and damned good writing!

Rick would never admit this...but as pissed as he was at his wife cheating on him, (completely understandable of him!), and so angry at her taking him to the cleaners in divorce court, (which was so unnecessary of her, but more than likely the judges fault, not that she or her attorney did anything to object)...
Rick can't even admit to himself, by story end, that all along, he still loved his wife, a whole lot!
Fucking woman was a real air-head though...
I have come to learn, after reading several of your stories on here, you are one great writer, and your stories are always worth the read!
I hope you never stop the humor in your stories, even if its only the way some cheated on wife, cusses her husband out, with very interesting, very colorful and truly nasty names, that....are the funniest I've not ever heard or thought of before, but so dead-on target, descriptive of the worthless, cheating slut, human shits, she is cussing out!
Thank you so much, for the great writing and so many good hearty belly laughs, reading your stories! The truly funny humor and laughs, are so welcome, in the LW story section!
This story was great, just a great, fun romp, to read through!
Thank you so much!

To LCL

I've asked that my previous comment on this (from 12-19-15) be removed, because while it's not dishonest or unrepresentative of my feelings, part of it I feel may be less than appropriate. So LCL, should you read this before the admins get my request, perhaps you could delete it yourself for me.

Now as for this comment...well, yes, it was a sore spot, and did strike a nerve. But yes, you're right about being c.i.s., which I really couldn't be less. I live vicariously through all my characters because life is so miserable as a gentleman. My feelings about this essay haven't changed much, but I just happened to remember the old comment I left here, and thought not all of it needed to be said. It was written in a heated mood, as I'm sure can be interpreted—hence a few of the remarks, the grammatical errors and all.

The truth is, I agree with and am grateful for nikkysg's comment, about most Readers not really caring who write their erotica. I can say from experience that all sorts of gay and bi women (men as well, but I'm focusing on the women here), who have read my material do in fact respond to all sorts of kink, a number of whom have told me so, and a number of whom I've continued corresponding with since then. So either she (nikky) has to be right, or my particular writing comes 100% from my inner lesbian side (which is why I removed the gender and orientation replies from my profile), and that's why so many actual lesbians enjoy it. I have to conclude that, based on your piece, and how many agree, since as I said none of those 12 things applies to me. Not automatically putting you in that group, LCL, of those who would enjoy my work; to be honest, you strike me as a bit intimidating and hard to impress by my abilities/material. And you're probably not too eager to find out after my first comment. And that's fine.

Of course, I have my own fetishes and kinks, and they don't resonate with everyone, because no fetish does. Just asking everyone out there to remember that we—by we, I do mean lesbians, sorry if I can't say that because I'm still male on the outside—are in fact all different, like any group, and like all different things. Similar to how male writers (of lesberotica or anything else) are capable of all different styles. So are female ones, but this article's about (I guess c.i.s.) male authors. Thanks. And hope you'll forgive me any unpleasantness my first comment triggered. —S

humor?

I didn't see any humor in this story, should have posted this in fetish, one star.

Annoying

I know it’s supposed to be funny, but the “and stuff” at the end of every sentence really got extremely annoying, and I just couldn’t get past the middle of the first page.

Brilliant 5 Stars!

I have to heartily disagree with the comments of the above. The story was satirical and whimsical enough to get an old fella's jollies going. I commend you young man, for everything.

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