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Looking forward to more

Really good story. I'm looking forward to reading more when you have time.

glad to see you back!

one of the best writers on here, so looking forward to more Alex and Alexa. this is a funny awesome story as well, please don't let the fucktards who give bad reviews drive you away.

Oh God...

Poor Krampus (giggles) I almost feel bad for him. Almost.

Amazing humour, just like the first one. The 'parkour boots' comment cracked me up. Can't wait for Part 3!

- Cori

Where

Can I order the catalog?

Absolute waste of eyesight

Can I have those few minutes back that I just wasted on this crap.

Excellent

Brilliant show of feminist brain farts.

Oh Yes! Better Living Through Modern Chemistry....

B_S, my compliments for your terrifically imagineered satire. I am especially relishing your clever "Lancing" of the suppurating boil of plutocratic capitalism.

yuck. . . . . . RAAC(even if this is in h&s)

"This time yesterday, for just a few moments I think hope finally left me. I had never been so low. I had lost everything, my family, my livelihood, my car, I had no power, heating or food. I had just a couple of hundred in the bank but was still a good fifty short of my mortgage. I was down and out, literally on the floor, I couldn't get any lower. I was drowning without a lifeline, but there you were, out of the blue. You helped me, you loved me, you brought me back in the world, back into your life."

I'm sorry did he not live the part where it was SHE that threw him overboard? I guess thats the humor part of this story

Gary was definitely "betrayed"

Pretty sure the author copy-pasted several lines directly from that moron's comments.

Not from his "stories" of course, those are even more incoherent and unreadable than his comments.

I DONT THINK

she is the one getting a PROMOTION, TK U MLJ LV NV

Wow, masterwork.

The use of the consulting phrases and corp speak was great. Super funny and sexy. 5 stars.

i love it

Very creative!

I'm really intrigued by this character, and what you have so far is pretty well written. But I hope there's more coming (you call it Chapter 1 so that's a good sign) because there's not really much of a story with her yet. Looking forward to more!

PEASE PORRIDGE IN THE POT

and what is the mixture, TK U MLJ LV NV

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