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dunno what to think .. read it n it makes sense but I just do not know what to think

Repost, yes

Thanks to everyone for the kind words,
Yes, this is a repost in that I had a different account for a bit (Petertime, which I chose to shut down)

I'll be posting from this one from here on out with my professional writing name of PT Winters. It'll be new stuff with the occasional old story (properly edited this time) thrown in.

Finally, the comment about the Gil Elvgren's pin-ups made my day, love his stuff and so thankful this story made some one else think of it.


Iv read this before, not sure if here or somewhere else though

set up

i see no humor in setting someone up like that. that is just plain mean. if she knew he been watching her for two years why was she still doing things in nude knowing he was watching what male wouldn't watch she was just being a prick tease and being a bitch then to set him up to get him beat up cause she is a slut her boy friend should beat her ass for doing things in the nude knowing people was watching


was a waste of time to read, worst rubbish i ever had the misfortune to read


Keep it going!

I thought it was a great

It was a pretty good job at a window in time with a fitting story. Keep it going!

close to the truth

I was raised up in the 50's and that was pretty much close to the truth,girls in school was taught how to be the perfect wife, they had a class just for girls the boys never got to hear what was taught in that class but I heard one thing they learned was how to change a pad during that time of the month. story was a good read,although there was some girls like that, where I lived most the girls knew how to give blow jobs cause I got a few even at a young age

Great Story!

I love using the 50s as the setting for the story. The prim and proper wife is going to learn the full extent of "wifely duties." Please give us more!

The More Things SEEM To Change....

I suspect that the premise of this story is balderdash. Women and men have been having all kinds of sex for thousands of years and certainly blow jobs were as common in the 1950's as they are today and as they were in the 1600's. Kinky and exciting sex was not invented in the 1950's!

More Please.

Good read

ed it, thought it was funny and sort of true.

Nice story

I hope to see more soon. I can imagine Jane as one of Gil Elvgren's pin-up housewives.

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