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Unlike a previous commentor, I don't think Jack is immoral. I don't think he deliberately does something that would hurt another or just doesn't care. I think he is more Amoral. It just does not occur to him that something he's doing with someone is something he shouldn't do. Look at how he's handleing Debbie. Patience and tenderness itself. He's thoughtful of her past experiences, but I think only because he's been Told about it. Not that he would have observed and thought about it on his own. I believe he just did not think the Beth situation was that serious and at the moment Debbie was vulnerable and needed his attention. He could have been more discreet about it. I wonder if he's ever going to try to do Cathy's mother-in-law? That would be a challenge. I think it is pretty much a given that he'll soon be doing Beth and that Debbie and Karen will probably be ok with it. I think he Does tend to think his Pecker will solve any and all problems with the opposite sex and earn the admiration of all males. Of course, he is probably a huge screwup on two legs, but wants to do better and I think by the end of this saga he'll probably be an adult. I like this very much.

Wow

Jesus H that was hot!!

A Wonderful Look

at Paradise, and a unique moment when husband and wife screw only each other!

Very Hot

You're right John, I'm so horny from reading it. She's better then me. I would be so sore if I had sex like that every week.

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Wonder Excitement

Great story, written by a thoughtful and passionate woman. Thanks so much, I really enjoyed it.

Led by the ring...

This is more like it. Would it not be nice if you could please every one every time? I love when the hero (boy or girl) comes out on top and the story focuses most of the story on that? Please read the next sentence at least twice to make sure you under stand me. You are not a good writer, not even a great one, you are a great story teller.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Thank You

I have received some very positive and encouraging comments so far and would like to say thank you. This is my first story but I hope to add more in the nearish future. Cheers

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DELIGHTFUL

WONDERFUL HUMOR GREAT SEX GOOD STORY DON'T MAKE IT YOUR ONLY SUBMISSION

Pretty Darned Bad

There was obviously not much effort put into this story whatsoever. Zero stars. I'll not read this author again.

Please check out Hamilton Swift's erotic romance ebook, Puppet, available at most ebook retailers, including Amazon, Apple, Google, All Romance ebooks, etc., as well as through its publisher, Ellora's Cave, at ellorascave.com.

Please check out Hamilton Swift's erotic romance ebook, Puppet, available at most ebook retailers, including Amazon, Apple, Google, All Romance ebooks, etc., as well as through its publisher, Ellora's Cave, at ellorascave.com.

Fun series!

Really entertaining sir, clever way to frame up some lovely descriptions of tit sex. Less cum on the carpet, more on the ladies LOL! Kudos!

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