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This is truly a superb story. I was very disappointed when you removed it from Literotica. Now I'm delighted to find that you're returning it, even if it is in a new and improved form. Please don't change it much. Incidentally, more such great stories would also be well received.

I love the idea!

This is a unique, creative and hot story! I love it! Keep it up!

Stolen moments

Stolen kisses. Stolen fucking. He'll need to steal her ass, next.

Thanks Don

Amazingly hot

Another amazingly hot story be one of the absolute best writers on lit. Do not miss any of her stories.*****

wonderful writing

You are a wonderful story teller, I am quite impressed (and turned on). I hope to hear from you again.

Loved the story

I very much enjoyed the story, very much looking forward to part two (in more ways than one)

so miley is totally ok with helping her dads partner cheat on him?

Total fucking bitch. Hope the dad finds out rats the three of them out and takes custody of the kid. The three of them can eat shit.


Fabulous story. Can't wait to read more.

Excellent writing!

Interesting plot, nice juxtaposition of thoughts, hot descriptions of turn-ons and self pleasure. I understand and commend you for how and why you categorized the story as you did. 5 stars. The last comment seems ignorant when it relates the affordadbility (or lack) of new housing to the validity of a story. Also, if anyone has taken a spin around the Loving Wives category, many of the stories are about woman having sex with men that aren't their legal or religious partner..usually with the consent and appreciation of their primary male partners. Write on!


Just a outstanding story from start to finish. Welcome back.


This was one of the best stories I have read in a long long time!! 5 stars for sure!!!


Liked the story and wanted to know if you knew if Anna had a sister who liked to play games like she did ~~ if so my number is _ _ _ _ _ ..!! LOL
Story was good but could have at least got "off" a couple of times you know.!**

Would love to see more.

Very sexy and exhilarating story. Would love to see where this couple takes it to next.


Ahh, the memoires. Loved the young Japanese girls when I was a young Marine stationed in Japan. Thanks!

I'm better now

I guess its my cream before you get your coffee, sugar

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