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All Comments on 'Anitta Ch. 04: Angel v. Demon'

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Sl33pingforestSl33pingforest11 months ago

Felt a bit hard to follow at times.

mharrisonmharrison11 months ago

Also felt that it was a bit hard to follow the changing perspective. More so than previous chapters. Struggled a little with some of the earlier paragraphs to follow their meaning / intent.... Got better further in.

Despite this it's still a great story and still really enjoying it.

Many thanks

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