Becoming a Cuckold Ch. 13

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I could hear Marnie crying louder in the background. Sounded like she was losing her big black cock. It didn't sound like he was taking her with him. Maybe he should. She obviously wanted his kid more than mine.

"I was going to tell you I was going to be home in three days. You can tell Marnie I don't want her there when I get back." Apparently, Master had his phone on speaker and Marnie heard me and started sobbing louder.

"I'm not taking your wife with me, Richard. Where I'm going, she wouldn't be safe. She still loves you."

"I don't care if she loves me or not. She can stay with her parents or her girlfriend, Cheryl. I don't really give a damn. I just want her out of the house when I get there."

"Marnie heard you tell her, Richard."

"Good bye, Andre."

"Richard, wait!"

"What?"

"I know I don't have a right to ask anything from you right now. But I have a huge favor."

"I'm listening."

"It might be the only kid I ever have in my life. I'm hoping you don't ask Marnie to get an abortion. Even if you give it up for adoption, I'd like to know there's a little piece of me out there someplace."

"What about Serena?"

"Turns out she got pregnant while I was out in California. She won't be carrying one of mine."

"Guess I need to find someone new to carry a little piece of me." Marnie was wailing harder when I hung up.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I agree with Frisky, almost completely. Don't like the m/m stuff, struggling to understand Richard, reading because I'm interested in the contents of other people's heads, especially when they think differently to me. I, too, started reading this because of the crossover with the Beth saga - it's opened some windows for me, although I'm still not entirely sure what I'm seeing through them.

Now I've got another problem - understanding those who (apparently) read every chapter only so that they can leave stupid, semi-literate, negative comments. Are they really mysogynistic, bigoted wankers, or are they pretending? Why?

I've given every chapter 5 stars to, partly at least, counter the idiots.

Dixon (UK)

Nato_Nato_over 1 year ago

If he stays with Marnie. I'm changing all my 5/5 to 1/5.

Nato_

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why do you continue a fetish story in Loving Wives? 1* for polluting this category further. Sick and tired of this category being used as a dumping ground for every other category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A gifted writer ? Are you joking? There is so much more better writer than him, especially in LW.

All his character are so unreal that the emotion feel fake , the plot is completely WTF and the sex scene everything but erotic

FriskyMindFriskyMindover 2 years ago

Why do you feel the need to post anonymously? Why do you care what I say? I have read stories in almost every category, not because I’m into every one of them, but because I want to know how other people think. Why they do what they do, why they want what they want. That interest extends beyond the sexual to everything that impacts most people’s lives. I want to know what makes people tick. As for cuckold stories specifically, they don’t make me feel guilty. More nauseous really cause of all the man on man sex. Most decidedly not my thing. As much as I appreciate Thor’s writing, I only began reading this series when I realized he was pulling characters I like from other stories of his. And I comment on his writing cause…if you hadn’t noticed…many writers on this site invite comments on their stories. They only ask the comments be polite and instructive. Most comments I’ve seen directed at Thor here have been hateful simply because the reader didn’t like the subject matter. Perhaps it’s offending some of the guys who feel their masculinity is being attacked by the very idea of cuckoldry hmm? And as for why I care…. I think Thor is a gifted writer and works hard at his craft and doesn’t deserve to be attacked by anonymous trolls who had a thousand story options yet chose his to read.. what’s in your mind?

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