All Comments on 'Bonds of Friendship Pt. 02'

how I feel about this story, it’s deeply disturbing on several levels. I wasn’t able to give it a rating.

Silence isn’t consent, having an orgasm whilst being used isn’t consent either and no consent means it’s not BDSM. It’s abusing a friendship taking advantage of someone who is emotionally fucked up.

Tess (UK)

Seriously. Put it in the NonConsent / Reluctance category, not BDSM. I see this mistake being made all the time by writers; BDSM does NOT equal Non-Consent.

Ignore the critics...it is definitely both BDSM and non consent. In fact, BDSM is a wide field and non consent fantasies clearly belong in that section.

I liked how Max treated Zoe and I liked the described professionalism with the ropes. The dominant came out quite nicely.

What you probably should concentrate more on, is the grammar. You sometimes get the tenses wrong but it comes with practice.