All Comments on 'Bonobo World 05 - Boy Meets Girl'

The choice you've made to submit something written in a language you're obviously not fluent in is no reason to grant you leniency in your horrible language skill. I hesitate to even call it a horrible skill as there is no skill there at all.

I can make a suggestion, or give you a reasonable choice to make. Either become fluent in English, or stick with a language you're fluent in, if there is one. Besides those two, the only other reasonable thing for you to do is not pretend to write at all.

Very good👍🏻. Wish it was longer.

cageysea9725, the writing in this is literally normal language skills for a native english speaker, in fact, I know quite a few native english speakers with much worse grammar.

Your spelling isn’t as bad as this guy makes it out to be, keep up the good work mate. Bet this guy only speaks one language.

Thanks to all for the support. I'm confident enough in my English skills and that guy is too obviously a troll to hit me where it hurts, but the backup feels nice.

Maybe it's your English skills that have contributed to your less than 3 people for each time you've submitted something, and the less than 4 stars this story garnered.

Why is it so many people conflate spelling with good grammar? Low intelligence is the only reasonable answer, and the only reason anyone would think this submitter's 'writing' is good is because they don't have a good grasp on English either.