Brian's Loss Pt. 03

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"As I see it, it's still a gorgeous ring; you still bought it. It's not the ring whose owner died of cancer; it's the ring your wife wears. One that I would be proud to wear. I don't need to wear this ring for you to remember her; you'll never forget her."

I ask her, "Would you like to wear that ring?"

Linda is appalled at me; she screams at me, "NOOOOO! Do it the right way! Oh, and wait. I want to record this."

She has her phone out and is now recording.

I take a deep breath, get down on one knee, look up at Janet, "Janet, my love, would you be a dear and agree to marry me?"

The next few moments are the longest in my life. I know it was a split second, but it seemed like ten minutes for her to scream out, "YES! YES! A thousand times YES!"

I stand up, and she jumps on me. Arms and legs are wrapped around me, and she is kissing me with a million kisses. We are all crying.

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It's precisely a year to the day later. I am in a tuxedo standing next to a priest. Walking down the aisle between the pews is a special cart. It's square and just wide enough for three young women to push it. In the middle, on top of a pyramid, is a ring. Each of my girls wears a fabulous dress that's an exact duplicate of Janet's dress.

I thought MaryAnn's dress was nice looking. But it was crap next to what Janet and my daughters are wearing. Bling, style, huge veils, and a style that will be forever timeless. The girls love the veils; it's new for them. I retrieve the ring and leave my babies standing in the aisle. They will walk back down the aisle with Janet and me.

Now it's Janet's time.

The music starts, and I am in tears as soon as I see Janet. She, too, is crying. It seems most of the place is. She is soooo awesome. Want to know how awesome she is? A few months ago, I met her family for the first time. Boy, was that embarrassing. I get home and tell Janet that her mother was one of the women I slept with when Linda passed my name around to help me learn about sex. Her response is to laugh her ass off.

We say our vows; we're declared man and wife. I reach over and give my now wife a passionate kiss. Before the place erupts with a cheer, Patty yells out, "MOM! I HAVE TO PEE!"

The end.

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nyteramblernyterambler4 months ago

Dam test jerker and dam good.

AlwaysAndForever82AlwaysAndForever824 months ago

loved it. by the end, i was crying just as much as they were.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle535 months ago

Quite the tale. Absolutely LOVED it. 5 BIGGGGG stars.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved this series the sadness and all the love sharing was awesome one more page with them having more children would have been nice and did he continue to have sex with his sisters?? 5 stars

KerrionKerrion9 months ago

While I loved the overall story, it was a hard to read. It was choppy, and a bit flighty and inconsistent in the telling. It was also difficult to tell just who was speaking all throughout the tale. 5 for the overall story, 2 for the way in which it was written... 3.5 overall from me.

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