All Comments on 'Broken Boy Ch. 02'

So Adorable! More please!

I loved this! Dirk needs to be permanently dealt with. Shae has been through enough. It’s time for Shae to be happy and loved!

I love how the story unfolds, and I love the slow-burn, it's very rare on LE and to be honest, I don't know why :)

Hot scenes can also be done in stories with a slow pace of action! :) And all the waiting and tension makes the final climax even stronger, mmmm! :) Great job!

Brilliant.

Of course we will wait for another - but with bated breath!

He is wonderful, you write beautifully, giving the atmosphere of the whole story, showing what true friendship-love means. I really like Shae and Adam, how they live each day together, and even Shae's fear of others…

In some scenes I see my own experiences and how I experienced this time of loneliness, fear, and especially getting to know friendship-love.

I am very impatiently waiting for the next part of Shae and Adam's story, with great hope that it will go well and even imagine that it will be a beautiful, wonderful mutual love.

Regards SissyBoy from Warsaw (Poland).

Cudowny jest, przepięknie piszesz nadając atmosferę całej historii, pokazując co znaczy prawdziwa przyjaźń-miłość. Bardzo podoba Mi się Shae i Adam, ich wspólne przeżywanie każdego dnia, a nawet ten strach Shae przed innymi...

W niektórych scenach widzę własne doświadczenia i jak przeżywałem ten czas samotności, strachu a w szczególności poznawania przyjaźni-miłości.

Bardzo niecierpliwie czekam na kolejną część histori Shae i Adama, z wielką nadzieją że potoczy się pomyślnie a nawet wyobrażam że będzie to piękna, wspaniała obostrona miłość.

Pozdrawiam SissyBoy z Warszawy (Polska).

Absolutely amazing, can't wait for the next chapter and to see their relationship bloom

WOW. I can't stop crying. So beautiful and filled with such love and acceptance.

It's getting juicy! Love the pace of the relationship and how sweet it's getting between them. 5*

@Edey I would say funny seeing you here but honestly it makes sense, this story reads somewhat like one of yours, in a good way.