All Comments on 'Cold Caller Pt. 04'

This story keeps getting better and better. Maybe it should run to Lesbian section off and on now at home as well as at work? Maybe bring in Andrew with Lucy for some 3somes maybe find out Mia and guy's real name, who knows they just might be the next door neighbors.. whatever you decide just keep it up... thanks.. Pappasleaze!

I just read the 4 chapters. Wow! One of the most erotic I have read in a while. 5 stars from me. I do hope you continue!

Second reading all 4 parts:

Very clever idea, beautifully executed. Lovely twist at the end. Complete, as is.

20 stars.

the ending was just perfect. this whole series is so hot.

5 stars—really great. Could use another read through, but hey, I got it. Please keep writing. Superbly erotic and just explicit enough but never becoming crude or vulgar.