by EmilyMiller
How to fire the imagination with the absolute bare minimum of description of the acts that are taking place
That sounds like a negative but far from it
An exceptionally written piece - well done Miss Miller
So unrealistic. I mean, what are the odds there was a "Cressie sized" table in that warehouse???
😆 🤣 😂
They say sex isn't fun unless it gets messy. This is definitely a LOT of fun. 😉
Was just thinking it could make a great audio if you found the right voice actor.
Great stream of consciousness flow makes this feel like Cressie is indeed addressing us, the reader.
And it inspires the intended result. 🍆💦
@Crios - thanks. Thought I’d see what I could come up with if I dropped all restraints. 😊 Em
@Anonymous - it did strike me that there was scope for Cressie to tell us some other stories. Maybe even in a more traditional narrative tense / person. Em
You go girl! I mean, really, really go! You go to the point where there’s no more go left to go!
But keep going anyway!
Interesting narration style, especially with the little cuts and time-skips. I commend you for constantly challenging yourself, and trying different things when it comes to your stories. That's the mark of an already amazing writer reaching even further in the future.
@Bazzle - maybe. If I can take the emotional strain of composing all that gritty realism. 😊 Em
Love the frantic narration style and content. Also laughed out loud at the line, "What sort of freak brings scissors to a gang bang?" Thanks!
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