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Click hereShe looked at me as if seeing a prisoner who had become paranoid about his incarceration and was clutching at any straw he could reach to save himself. "Elena is a good friend of mine. Please relax for now and let me see what I can do for you."
I could have bitten my tongue off for saying that about Elena. It had been going so well until I made a derogatory comment about her friend. Would that go against me? Nothing I had heard from Catina Mitrea made me feel any better, but why should I feel optimistic when all I'd experienced in the last couple of years was defeat in any dealings I'd had with the sadistic women that surrounded me? I was almost resigned to spending the rest of my life in this place, unable to ever escape the system that seemed focussed on keeping me here.
I lay on my bed feeling utterly depressed. Not even the thoughts of Cassie could raise my spirits, certainly thoughts of Becky were not going to help, the evil bitch who had put me in this predicament in the first place. My mind was very clear as to what I would be saying to her when I eventually got out of this hellhole, but would I ever get out to be able to say it to her?
Coming next in chapter 22: My day in court arrives.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI really hope David can go home and the next book is about the sex games with Becky and occasionally going back to prison because they paid them or something.
william48almost 2 years agoI think the anonymous poster is right. There is no chapter 22. We are all going to be left to finish our own version of the story ourselves
ABIIIIalmost 2 years agoIt's so hard waiting for chapter 22. That has me thinking ahead to waiting for Book 5 to start. It's going to be seriously rough.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWell I am certain he is not going to get off but I dont think that I can be bothered with another book about prison life, especially as he is now suffering from Stockholm Syndrome.
My preferred option is for him to get a judicial caning, probably from Justyna as compensation for the alleged assault, followed by some more hard labour and then going home to find that Becky is divorcing him because she is disgusted by the "assault"
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoToo F’ing funny. For a story that is solely based on repeating everything over and over…did you really just write a chapter that was a recap of past chapters? Yes just a recap not even a redo or a rewrite or a repurpose…just a recap. And did people actually read it all so they could remind themselves of everything that keeps repeating over and over just in case they forgot? You sir, are master of wasted words and time. I tip my hat to you.
xIntrusionxalmost 2 years agoSo the way I see it, there's a handful of ways this could play out.
1) David ends up winning his trial (somehow) and ends up being released at the expected date. I think we all know it's EXTREMELY unlikely that this is what happens, but it's a possibility.
2) David outright loses his trial and is sentenced to more time in prison (up to 2.5 more years).
3) David takes a plea bargain, only to find out he would have won his trial if he fought it but the agreement is nonetheless binding.
4) David rejects the plea bargain, only to lose at trial and end up staying longer than he otherwise would have had to if he had taken it.
5) Lastly, and this is an EXTREME long shot but I want to account for it, there's a slight chance that some of the other commenters are right and that this is a ruse to toy with him one final time before he leaves (possibly even getting out a couple weeks early). I put the likelihood of this option at basically 0, but again it's an option that needs to at least be expressed.
There are obviously variations on how these would each play out, but I think those are the main outcomes that could happen.
There are also various questions that will be revealed at some point, likely in the next chapter. For example, 1) why would Elena do this? Other than wanting to be unnecessarily cruel, she knows David doesn't deserve this and this seems beyond the pale even for these sadistic women. 2) What did Pompescu say to Becky? and lastly, 3) if David DOES lose and have to stay longer (about a 99% chance) then where does Olly take this story for the final book? Teasing/labour/caning for the 40th chapter isn't going to cut it, so what happens?
My personal prediction is that David will lose his trial and have to spend more time in prison. Between the 4th and 5th book there will be a time skip to when he gets out. At some point during the 5th book, he'll volunteer to go back to the paid side of the prison, which is where the series will end and is where he ends up finishing his diary entries.
ForTheLoveOfFemdomalmost 2 years agoI'm wondering if this entire threat from Elena is just a ploy to get him to agree to a longer sentence, and in reality she has nothing that would actually hold up in a court of law. Honestly for him staying in prison to be interesting I would need to see a lot more humiliation, teasing, edging, and worshiping of the guards. His usually routine of labor and cannings have just been done too much. I think a big twist would also be great where Becky and Elena are in a secret relationship, or Becky and madam Popescu or something, and turn into into a lesbian cuckolding story.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI think Olly said he was finished at 5 books. I hope the prison story doesn’t carry on to book 5.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoJust torture porn of a mentally ill character. Three books and he continues to just go along with all the abuse. He hasn’t grown, changed or developed as a character. There really isn’t a story anymore. It is just another act of cruelty each installment that the reader knows will never end in anything good for David. Even if this is some final mind fuck of David and he is released to go home with Becky, he has not changed in all these years. Right now he has been imprisoned 19 months (counting the traffic sentence) for Becky’s bullshit. He will go right back to his cock cage, Gina’s cane and be a willing cuckold for Becky and her crowd of boy toys. Just not much left for this story unless one inexplicably enjoys reading of the same guys abuse over and over and over and over and over and over and over
