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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Really enjoying this story. Can't wait forvchapter 3

tallman441tallman4415 months ago

I like how this story is unfolding

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lots of errors, but the story ranked quite well.

Proof Reader could/should help to identify these.

The most obvious was the mention of the on suite bath; it is enjoyable suite.

Quite enjoy your enthusiasm for/towards your offerings.

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My stories on here are the first I have written so I do hope they are enjoyed by all those that read them. Comments are appreciate and could help me develop my technique and also may give me ideas for new stories. I welcome any contact from people with suggestions. With luck a...

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