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Heather was caught off guard by the show of gratitude and began crying silent tears of joy.
To Jimmy she turned and asked, "You mean you're not mad at me or ashamed of me after all that I said downstairs when they were... when they.."
"You mean when they were abusing you and you were doing what was needed to get through it all? No, it took me a while to realize what makes you tick but I also realized you are a genuinely good woman and I'm glad you're my wife. I hope you feel the same about me after all that I did to you in anger."
"You called me your wife! Does that..."
"Yes! I forgive you! And yes we're gonna grow old together and have lots of babies. But you're going to have sister wives, three of them!" Jimmy said and looked at the Samuels women.
Lexi was the first to react. "Did you hear that Heather? We're gonna be sisters! Come on sis you need a shower I'll come help you." And they quickly disappeared to go shower together.
"What about us Daddy? Are you still gonna give us babies?" Jemma asked with hope in her eyes.
"Let's just say we're going to need a very big house with a huge nursery!" Jimmy said with a huge smile.
THE END!
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Hope you enjoyed this story. I could go further with it but I think it would cheapen the body of work.
Ever since I saw the movie "Virtuosity" I've been obsessed with nanotechnology. Especially the fact that it's someday going to be a common tool in the medical field.
Please vote. Since this is the final chapter, I really would like to hear your comments. Thank you to those that have commented already in earlier chapters.
Not sure what I'll be writing next but I'd like to take a shot at a non-erotic story.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous27 days agoso Jimmy is an part-selfmade Assassin. He flushed funds from big companies, bought an lab and solarfarm, rented an helicopter, jet and 5 stone temple pilots on standby. Now he is an progclaimed killer, but maybe he was already by being in the military. Oh no, he was an hacker or sw developer. Good that he did come arround for his wife but that diesen't make things right what he did to other men like Paul(a). If an man can fuck your wife, it was her decision to let him do that. That don't give right to harm them permanently in such extreme. But ok, as an fiction story you got it well done. In the middle i think you overdid the sexscenes and it would have done some good to finish some things up - the two wifes he got from the players in the casino were leying there passed out and then just seemed to be vanished or forgotten, as same as the unnecessary 12" cock on Pauls wife. Over the whole story i guess Jimmy himself was the nastiest criminal and therefore not worth to play any heropart. As soon he got the ability he's gone off charts without any honor or finesse. If you have fun by writing keep on going. I hope you take that as some constructive points as it's ment to be. Thank you for publishing.
Lynchjim4 months agoI loved this story but I honestly think you cheated the story out of probably another ten great chapters jimmy could have righted wrongs while fucking evil men’s evil wife’s and made Heather like her normal self before Paul destroyed her life. Please either do a side story from this wor just add to it please PLEASE.
Anonymous5 months agoGreat series! Loved everything about it. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!! Will definitely check out your other stories.
SaltyOldfatman7 months agoThis was a very well written story with, my favorite, very little noise. Excellent work!
I look forward to reading more from you.
Do you use a story board? Because you did quite well keeping the personalities of each of the characters separated while allowing the desired/affected traits to blend seamlessly. Well done. I also enjoyed the way our protagonist kept himself from slipping to far down the rabbit hole of revenge against his wife, instead regretting some of the hurt he'd caused. Again, well done.
In summary, this was a well written and thoughtful journey through cuckoldry, revenge and comeuppance that wrenches the reader through the anger and shame of being cuckolded and leads them by the hand to the best outcome possible. I loved it!
Thank you.
