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Click hereShe ran to the bathroom and got the washcloth she had used on me already and wiped up what little there was. I was barely awake, more than ready to sleep for days. "Gracie, I love you. Thank you."
"No, baby. thank you. You always make me feel like the most special girl in the world."
If she said something else after that, I have no idea. I was sound asleep while she was saying goodnight. Grace kissed my cheek and held me as she cuddled with my sleeping body. She was tired and contented and ready to sleep. She knew where my heart and soul were. Right with my love.
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As usual, I always appreciate your votes and comments.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoDEAR RABBITMAN55
I HONESTLY LIKED PART I, II & III OF THIS SERIES.
THOUGH PART IV WAS WRITTEN WELL, I SOMEHOW FAILED TO CONNECT MYSELF TO THE STORY.
IF HENRY AND GRACE ARE A "MAD(E) FOR EACH OTHER" COUPLE, WHY A SWAPPING DRAMA?
TOTALLY UN NECESSARY.
RATHER BLOCKED THE SMOOTH RUNNING OF THE STORY.
I'D HIGH REGARDS BOTH FOR HENRY AND GRACE.
BUT THEIR IMAGES BEING DELIBERATELY TURNISHED WITH THAT SINGLE ACT.
NOT ACCEPTED BY ME, WHATEVER MAY BE THE LOGIC OR REASONING.
HENCE 4***" FOR THIS STORY UNLIKE 5***** FOR THE PREVIOUS THREE.
YOUR W(L)IFE CAN'T BE SHARED WITH BUDDIES. SHE 'IS' NOT A COMMODITY!
CRISPY AND CLEAR.
THAT'S MY VIEW POINT.
I'M NOT HEAR TO HURT OR JUDGE OTHERS COMMENTS. PLEASE.
jlg07almost 3 years agoThe swapping ruined for me. They constantly were saying they'd do anything as long as it was just yh
Anonymousover 3 years agoI don't think the swapping fits if they are so in love with one another as you have written then the swapping makes seem that they aren't really in love with each other cause they aren't sleeping with just each other they wanted to sleep with others and that isn't really love they feel for one another
Rabbitman55over 3 years agoAuthorI don't think you've read any of my other stories. I've never written about size aside from this one instance. All my protagonists are a above average, 5-8 inches, no monster dicks, so it's hardly a "fetish". You clearly don't know what you're talking about.
Anonymousover 3 years agoway to ruin a good story with your fetish shit, made sure to tell us how big the other guy was I noticed. Gotta fuel that cuck fantasy shit huh? gross and dissapointing
Anonymousover 3 years agoI for one actually DID like the swapping, it was hot but it also served to help them reiterate there love for each other. a good chapter to the overall story.
JaceyTreyover 3 years agoI get experimenting, I did it, too...I just didn't like it. I skipped the part where they weren't together. Just couldn't read it. So, in my mind, it didn't happen. Great series so far.
RRC2over 3 years agoThe author is consistent in his story. The couple love each other and keep enjoying the depths of that love. While I didn't care for the plot of this chapter, the partner swap, I do like the way Rabbitman focused on the commitment between the two lovers. While the swap is taking place, the new woman is very complimentary of Grace and the man is falling stronger in love with Grace.
It is a fun story and a joy to read
THANKS
Rabbitman55over 3 years agoAuthorThanks to those who really are enjoying this story. I hope I can keep up the good work and keep the story interesting. To the two who didn't like what happened in this chapter, one of you didn't explain what you didn't like. If I don't know what's broke, I can't explain my thinking nor can I fix it. For the person who didn't like the direction I took with the switch, I understand how you feel. I just remember my own early college years as a time for experimenting, even with someone serious. The time before you're thinking about settling down, it's the last time you can think about doing something like that. I knew some wouldn't like it. But it's my story, my characters, and that's how I took the story. Hopefully you'll enjoy my future writings. Just so you know, my choices are all my own.
