All Comments on 'Father's Fall from Grace Pt. 02'

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RTR10RTR10about 2 months ago

Is she fucking with him? A sort of punishment for what she perceives as his "abandonment" of her as a child? The way she had a reaction when she found out he already had two daughters makes me think she went into this with an ulterior motive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Nice story. Waiting on the next one. Hope it's a bit longer. Sounds like it's close to mating time working up to the breeding. 5/5

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 2 months ago

Wow! That was hotter than the first chapter! Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Fuuccckkkk! I still believe your chapters are short, but oh my word, this is fucking hot. Andy is aldready turning out to be a manipulative little twat. I love it! 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

RUBBISH!!

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