- Loving Wives
- Forever
- Page 6
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Click hereMy depression has gotten so severe that came down to the point where I couldn't take it anymore and hell couldn't be any worse than what I was going through. I yelled out, I'm prayed to Kim to forgive me for my arrogance. I haven't slept for days; I was so exhaustion but didn't want to sleep and dream of the life I would near have again. Finally, I passed out for sheer exhaustion, as I sleep, I felt somebody put their arm around me. I woke and turned over the see my lovely bride. At 1st I thought it was just a dream that would end Like all the other dreams, I reached over to touch her and realize it was her. I looked into her eyes, I have missed you so such, I am so sorry. She placed her fingers on my lips hush, you need not say another word, I've already forgiven you. I broke out in tears, sympathetically she pulled me to her chest, I have missed you also. I looked up into her eyes and we embraced That night we made love like we did the 1st time in that little cabin on the river. Later I awoke to see Kim's standing over me crying. I love you Tim so much I love you too Kim, why are you crying. she did not answer I tried to move my hand up to wipe the tears from her eyes, but I could not lift my arm. She leaned down and gave me a kiss, I tried to give her a kiss back but could not. She then said I will love you forever. Then she said you can turn off the respirator now. I was little confused, in the background, I heard a beeping noise that matched my heart beat, and the beeping noise started to get fainter and farther apart. The room was growing dimmer with each slower beat till finally there was no more beeping and the room was black.
- COMMENTS
Infosauger11 months agoHm, sorry, I don't really understand the ending.
At first it seems his wife died in the accident and he fell into a depression. And when he was going to die bacause said depression the ghot or soul of his dead wife came to him.
However, then the wife said you can turn off the respirator now. So was his wife alive and he in coma and on live support? How could they communicate when he is immobile?
bobryan5126412 months agoI thought the story was fantastic right until the end. I wasn't prepared for that kind of an ending I thought it was Rushed and I didn't see it coming so therefore I thought the ending was little bit of a letdown i was hoping to feel good about something versus feel bad about something but hey that's life I know good job keep it up try again overall I'll give it a good seven and a half fixed the ending I give it a 10
N1ckDan9erabout 1 year agoAuthorI appreciate the positive feedback. I try to learn from it. To those of you that don't offer any constructive criticism and blast me for my spelling, grammar obviously have not
READ MY PROFILE. So your opinion is worthless.
Thank you all the rest.
Anonymousabout 1 year agokind of a let down at the end. I understand the Forever Love thing, but geeze, this is supposed to be erotic. It was, for 80% of it I suppose.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoWhy is there always some little asswipe who whines about a story being in the wrong category. To the dipshit below:" this story is 100% in the correct category. Its about a husband and wife who enjoy some extramarital fun and the wife having sex with others. Thats the literal description of this category. Were sorry it hurts your delicate feeling reading about wives having sex with others. Maybe you should check out the Disney website.
