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assman70assman704 months ago

Very nice, this actually sounds like a real story, no exaggerations anywhere, very realistic. Seems like there was a very active weekend at that country home and a chapter 2 or even 3 could fulfil more pages of good writing. I like it a lot, kudos. 5*.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

very good. thank you

BCJ111BCJ1114 months agoAuthor

@assman70 - Why thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The lisp added nothing, otherwise it was a hot, fun story.

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Old enough to know better. Old enough to want to try things Mature enough to accept others' viewpoints Open to meeting all orientations for mutual exploration and fun. Started a series of stories under the title "Fragments XX" where X is a number. The settings have some basi...

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