by kc_crozetti
One of your best stories, I really loved the length, descriptive imagination and the dynamics. You think of such imaginative scenarios, more please!
Fun story! A lot of details on the parade of men presented to the audience. Who’ll bid highest? Will they share David? Display him to a new group of females?
Thank you so much for making David the "guest of honor" at this event. Nothing pleases me more than reading about all the embarrassing surprises he has to endure. David's reactions to being groped and fondled before an audience were perfect. All that blushing and groaning was so sexy!
Slightly reminiscent of a bachelorette party I attended in Nashville!! Oh my.
That loincloth bit was a nice touch. There is something about an unveiling that is so tantalizing! Like opening a present. I wonder who bought sweet David?
Another enjoyable contribution to a well-loved series. I can't wait to see what other embarrassing encounter David will have next. What will he do? What will they do to him? So many questions that have had an answer that made me so happy. He can try as hard he likes to hide but those thirsty Amazons will find him (and I hope they do). It's so much fun when David thinks that he going to get out of this unseen only to discover the ladies have other plans.
It would be interesting to see that Ariel won it and invited it to a graduation prom or a party.
It would be interesting to see that Ariel won it and invited it to a graduation prom or a party.
What happened to Chapter 6 was that, after being posted for six years (since December 2015), a Literotica Moderator rejected the story in March 2022 and took it down after one reader objected: REPORTED BY COMMUNITY MEMBERS - [[Details: 15 years old in flashback story being groped by the girl.]] In order to re-post my invented story, they want me to censor the imaginary scene (about 234 words) where a girl recalls seeing fictional, 18-year-old David in a swimsuit with an erection when he was 15. If I make changes, I can submit the story to a Volunteer Editor for approval, and once re-approved, submit it again for re-posting. Is the story worth the bother?
I loved it all and would love to see Chapter 6 reposted as I guess it was to be the final chapter?
I and I am sure others would be grateful if you woukd go to the trouble of revising and resubmitting chapter 6. It's so good!