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This is hot. I really hopr you write them in a scenario where James openly cuckold fucks the girls in front of their cucks and degrades and feminises them as well.

@talbert29: Some feminization planned.

It's good content, and I like how you write from the women's perspectives and psycho-analyze their mindsets and motivations. But the time skips and changes in perspectives in-chapter can be a bit jarring. This chapter started off great, and the second half was too, but going from the present, and then back several months, while also changing the character whose perspective you're writing, in the same chapter, just really makes it feel like two separate chapters instead of one.

Super hot story, but man Jackson is just such a depressing character. It's hard to read about anyone getting abused the way he is. I do acknowledge that you have to write him that way in order to appeal to the fetish, and the story would definitely not be as hot if he was written to have a backbone. But during the post-nut clarity I do find myself wishing for another version of the story where he gets a FAT redemption arc and Kendall and James basically kill themselves because they get completely demolished by Jackson. Obviously I am aware you will probably never write that version of this story. And yes, I know there is an entire category of cuck redemption erotica for me to read if I so choose. Ironically I don't get off to the redemption stuff. I'm really just writing this comment for my own sanity. Anyway, overall great story.

@Anonymous: I doubt you will come back to read this, but: I appreciate your thoughtful comment, and I am glad that you are enjoying the story. The fetish is what it is. I am working on another project that will tease at redemption but not in the way that you have suggested. I don't enjoy revenge or suicide as resolution. It feels like it misses the point in a way I can't quite explain. For me, if I were to ever give Jackson a happy ending, it would not be in the death of James or Kendall but in the arms of someone else who loves him for who he is.