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by Paladin1188

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why don't would-be writers Proof Read??

"By the veing of the second day, ..."?

'Veing'??

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It seemed like there was something else missing just before that typo. I agree. Wait a day and read it again before hitting send. Cringeworthy spelling detracts from the flow of the story.

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I have written a variety of material but would welcome collaborations. I do read my comments if you wish to leave them. As Paul McCartney said, " I wanna be a paperback writer'

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