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Click here"No! No. I can't do that, I won't."
He made another noise of disagreement and kissed my jaw and neck, then moved down and shoved my bra up over my breasts so he could caress them and kiss them, sucking on my nipples in turns.
I knew I should stop him, tell him no, but...
"Ohhh.." I breathed as he gently tugged on my hard nipple with his teeth. He shoved my pants down and I stopped him again. "No! I really can't! I am not healed and I am not on birth control."
"Fuck birth control," he growled and kissed me again. He did not try to push my pants down again, but we kissed each other and pressed against each other until we both wanted to explode.
With a frustrated roar, he rolled and undid his pants, then pulled me close, guiding my mouth to him. I hardly had to do anything before he shot into my mouth and he didn't complain at all when I spit it out on the ground. He just rolled me again and went back to kissing me and groping my breasts.
We lay there, making out like teenagers in the grass. I didn't know how much time had passed, but eventually, Torque showed back up.
"Rally? You still there man?"
"Fuck off Torque!"
"Man it's after 4 in the morning. You good? I'm going to bed."
"I'm fine. Hold off. Tell the others we are going back to the hill."
"For real man? You know that may piss some people off."
"Then they can stay the fuck here," Rally said angrily. He turned back to me as Torque left.
"I am serious about what I said," I began.
"I fucking heard you. Here's how it will be. We close that bedroom door and I am yours. As you want me. In front of my clan, you are Princess. You are mine and you WILL walk the line for me. That is the compromise I will make."
"No punishments."
"No hard punishments. No more railing."
"Railing?"
"Fucking you from behind."
"Rally..."
"It's how it's going to be Princess," he snarled. "I refuse to let you go again and I refuse to give up who I am."
"I want birth control."
"No. I want children."
"I'm not ready! Compromise. One year, then we revisit the conversation."
"Three months."
"One year. I won't budge on that. And we will talk about it, it's not a deadline."
He growled again.
"A relationship is give and take. You can't always get your way."
"Fine," he said angrily.
"And I want a dog."
He laughed suddenly, a belly laugh that startled me. "Compromise? Let's get three, but I want a pit."
"I like pits. We can get two. And one small dog."
"A yappy dog?"
"Small and snuggly. And dogs are inside animals, not outside animals."
"Agreed."
"Can I have chickens?"
"Absolutely. I like eggs."
"And goats?"
He chuckled again. "Yeah Princess. They are good for the yard. You are going to keep me busy as fuck, aren't you?"
"I hope to. If not outside then in the bedroom."
"Mmmm," he purred, kissing me again.
I giggled and kissed him back until the sun rose on us.
- COMMENTS
dasgoodshitalmost 2 years agoi sometimes like noncon, but only if it's done right, because most of the time it isn't.
rule 1: the nonconsenting individual cannot voluntarily initiate sexual contact (especially after being beaten and raped and whatever else, as well as crying themselves to sleep immediately before).
rule 2: there is only one rule
so you lost me on page 3; totally unbelievable.
i liked the premise, but page 3 was too much, too fast, considering what she went through and that she was conservative and she was basically kidnapped.
Auri22over 2 years agoReread again and I still love Rally! And I still can't get over some of these ridiculous comments!
DarkStarFallingover 2 years agoAlways astounded by your work!! I always start by telling myself it's only one, but I'll end up going through three of your stories before I can put them down! You're by far one of my favorite authors ever, and I'll be reading you for a long time to come!
Auri22over 2 years agoWow I came back for a reread because something about Rally does it for me.
These comments are crazy. This is literotica and people are taking it way too seriously. This is a noncon story on a porn site.
I've clicked on stories where I thought it was one thing and it turned into weird incest stories that I'm not interested in so rather than blast the author for what I deem as gross I just found a new story to read. Usually from gab!
What are people expecting? Moby Dick? Little women? I just really can't understand the expectations.
scarletbbyover 2 years agoI truly don't understand people that will take the time to read stories, then all they do is bash the author for writing said story. YOU were the one that read it. YOU "wasted" your time, on YOUR OWN free will. No one told you you had to read this. The author doesn't owe you shit! I know plenty of writers that have been negatively impacted by rude comments, and it's frankly disgusting. If you don't like something, just move on. Not every story is going to be a 10/10 for you.
gabthewriteralmost 3 years agoAuthorHello Juderboy. In many states, squatters have rights, and even ones where they don't, squatting is a civil matter as opposed to a crime like basic trespassing. In this case it had more to do with several large men threatening her that kept her from doing anything. She was afraid, too afraid to try and get help and that place effected her in a way that didn't have her in her right mindset. To tell someone who has been kidnapped to just have them arrested isn't really how that works. She is vulnerable and afraid and not in her right mindset.
Also... it's not much of a noncon story if she just manages to get to the cops and get away. :P
juderboyalmost 3 years agoeverybody thinks you are a great writer. Maybe, but this was one of the shittest stories I have ever wasted my time reading. I kept waiting for something to happen that would make all this bullshit make since. Have you ever heard the word Trespassing. They didn't have a lease. They broke in, They held her against her will. And that was all on the first day. How many more crimes do they have to commit before action can be taken. So you think they can stay? At the very least they would have to pay her rent. So she picks a number they can't pay and they are out of there.
magevover 3 years agoAs usual, a great writer, and as usual, a nerve-wrecking story. It made me cry multiple times, my heart hurts for the abuse victims and how they perpetuate the cycle in their lives. I could not buy into her falling for the dude who consistently abused her just for some moments of gentleness and some orgasms, no matter how spectacular. How can anyone with a spine fall for someone who pushes them around and disregards their wishes so casually, from how to dress to how to deal with an IUD? This came close to manslaughter from his casual neglect to respect another person's bodily integrity, and she still went with him????? At least in the end she demanded some concessions, but I think the negotiations missed the point, this whole "toe the line" thing is bullshit, being a kind person behind closed doors is no big accomplishment if he's still going to push her around in public, and he truly is a jerk if after the way he has treated her, instead of groveling long and hard, he claims his behaviour was true to what he is, - then he is indeed a bad guy despite some gentle moments (all abusers have gentle moments, and all are in the end still bad guys). He was irredeemable to me - from the fact that he was aware early on that she had been abused and still chose to abuse her himself in multiple ways, to the idea that him promising not to physically torture her as punishment is some big concession when in reality there should be no such nonsense as punishment between equal partners, and she is still a victim for not insisting on that much more strictly in their negotiations. I felt sorry for her throughout, but kind of lost some sympathy when she got so fascinated with the cock piercings instead of running far and fast and at least giving him privacy like she would like herself, that part seemed a bit of a stretch story-wise. I was very sorry for her when she was being beaten for doing very normal things, like trying to escape, but lost some sympathy when she accepted the punishment, she should have stood her ground until he realized that he is in the wrong and showed regret. I also lost some sympathy when reading her train of thought about how she was trying to disregard how he hurt her and looking for comfort from him, this is typical abuse victim behavior, but when we read fiction, we kind of want a happier resolution than a sad, heartbreaking repeat of old patterns... I keep reading your stories in hopes of finding one with a stronger woman who would cut the guy's dick of instead of succumbing to him after he perpetuates abuse on her, or at least a guy who recognizes how bad his behaviour has been and resolves to grovel for the rest of his life to make up for it. Still hoping!
