All Comments on 'His Girl Her Drip Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
excellent, but too short

This is an excellent love story, but this chapter is rather too short. A more extensive introduction and build-up would have been better. The love scene is well done but it too is rather too short. However, all in all, this is a wonderful romance story, and hopefully the author's indication that this is only just the first chapter will turn out to be true.

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