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by Ooopsiedooherecomesthegoo69

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EmeryMaeEmeryMaeover 3 years ago

I like the story and concept. It is good and I world like to see more. Just please proof read what your wrote or ask someone help edit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Longer!

I agree with Emery Mae about proofreading, but also make it longer than a few paragraphs.

RustyghRustyghover 3 years ago

Love your story and your creative juices and would love to offer my proofreading services. I'm sure I could help you produce a product your readers would critique more favorably.

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