All Comments on 'Is This Turning Me On? Pt. 02'

She's doing a carwash...make her wear a g-string. Maybe even do it topless. You can also maybe start making her do webcam shows.

Great to see part 2 posted. Only problem I had was some confusion that may have been my own fault (reading too fast, or too distracted by work). Anyhow, I was confused about the main character's buddy setting up the email address, I thought it would be a fake address used by her, not to contact her. Seems like that's only a one time use, kind of a waste really.

Anyhow, once I made that connection it all flowed a little smoother.

Really, I love it. I'd love to see what Ashley does if she gets really turned on, but with no, ah, outlet.

will someone please fuck the shit out of this girl already??!!

the anticipation is killing me.

(oh...that"s the point? never mind!)

I'm itching to see the next chapter in this series. Please don't leave us hanging.

Amazing stories - cant wait for the 3rd chapter - would love to see her get turned on without release!

I can't wait to read part 3.

I need that next chapter!!

awesome story, looks like one of the best authors on the site, love the slow tease, please post more a.s.a.p.!!!

phenomenal story, great situations and characters, can't wait for part three!

well written

Great story so far, would love to see more

Amazing story! when is part 3 coming?