by NCER
phenomenal story, great situations and characters, can't wait for part three!
awesome story, looks like one of the best authors on the site, love the slow tease, please post more a.s.a.p.!!!
Amazing stories - cant wait for the 3rd chapter - would love to see her get turned on without release!
I'm itching to see the next chapter in this series. Please don't leave us hanging.
will someone please fuck the shit out of this girl already??!!
the anticipation is killing me.
(oh...that"s the point? never mind!)
Really, I love it. I'd love to see what Ashley does if she gets really turned on, but with no, ah, outlet.
Great to see part 2 posted. Only problem I had was some confusion that may have been my own fault (reading too fast, or too distracted by work). Anyhow, I was confused about the main character's buddy setting up the email address, I thought it would be a fake address used by her, not to contact her. Seems like that's only a one time use, kind of a waste really.
Anyhow, once I made that connection it all flowed a little smoother.
She's doing a carwash...make her wear a g-string. Maybe even do it topless. You can also maybe start making her do webcam shows.