All Comments on 'Jan's Evolution Ch. 03'

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namidaboshinamidaboshi6 months ago

As hot as this story it just feels slightly off somehow. Maybe it's just me, but I can't quite put my finger on it. It's like you're trying to appeal to a particular subset of your fans. I don't know.

However, this was a very hot chapter. Jan getting tattoos not including.

Are Jan and Wanda going to have a relationship? It would be quite sweet and hot.

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I used to be RobinAZ. I've been absent here for several years. Ready to start submitting again, with the same basic cast of characters. Readers are advised to follow my works in this order. Original Angels (republished Weekend with Angels) Traveling East Butt Plug The Family...

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