All Comments on 'Marital Lust 08: Twice as Nice'

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SirKevinSirKevinalmost 2 years ago

I hope this is somewhat autobiographical, because this sounds delightful!

I did notice one typo ('too' instead of 'to', or something minor like that). Let me know via PM (or hit me up on Fetlife @SenseiKevin) if you want a proof reader for the next chapter. I'd love to help.

These are excellent characters, good dialogue (which is so hard to do well), and healthy situations between fully consenting adults. I follow the FFM tag, so I'll see your next chapter with Samantha regardless. Looking forward to it!

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Finding a way to indulge in some fantasies while scratching a particular creative itch. 8/2/23: New story out! Still have a few more ideas, but they are taking their time to get where I want them to be. As always, I appreciate all the comments!