All Comments on 'My In-Law Art/Porn Affair Pt. 02'

You write well and your premise is intriguing but get on with it.

Is your erotic story going to start being erotic? Hoping you will start the sex and loving soon before exhaustion sets in and I abandon your series.

Are the characters you refer to as "Elsie" and "Edith" supposed to be the same person?

Outline format without any eroticism at all. More like a legal brief.