by deepinleftfield
Loving this story. Well written and nicely paced. Hoping there will be lots more chapters. Perhaps parents can help kids explore their kinks and fantasies and vice versa. Definitely think daughter should at some stage get a mild spanking from her daddy for being so naughty
I Seldom like the use of the word slut in this type of story but you've introduced it carefully and balanced it well with the love and respect stevie has for his family and the family have for each other so it actually works well. The sex is deftly described. passionate without being too brutal or over the top.
I also really liked the mothers voyeuristic tendencies and the son "looking to her for" inspiration". I hope you introduce some nudist elements into future chapters. Keep up the good work and 5 stars from me
the story was good until the father was introduced and at that point I stopped reading. I really thought that in some way the brother and sister would get together for a long term relationship. Sorry went from a 4/5 to dislike.