All Comments on 'Odyssey of Hannah & Laena Ch. 06'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexan12 months ago

Meh...you dove right into my favorite thing with this one, but for 9 pages of content, I certainly would have appreciated more of a story. You went too far with describing every tiny detail of their tryst. They all should have fallen in love and become a committed throuple by the end. 4/5 in spite of the fact that parts of the sex scenes bored me to tears.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The scenes could be hotter and more lustful, but seeing how well the girls and guy are satisfied pleases me.

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Just an aspiring writer trying to make some good smutty stories. Thanks for reading guys! Shout out to Antarctica77 and Stubby for helping me with my stories! Updates: - There has been an error for chapter 1 of Old Neighbor. It seems that it has been replaced by chapter 2. ...