by Joko44
Meh...you dove right into my favorite thing with this one, but for 9 pages of content, I certainly would have appreciated more of a story. You went too far with describing every tiny detail of their tryst. They all should have fallen in love and become a committed throuple by the end. 4/5 in spite of the fact that parts of the sex scenes bored me to tears.
The scenes could be hotter and more lustful, but seeing how well the girls and guy are satisfied pleases me.