All Comments on 'Orbiting Bodies'

This was such a great chapter. I loved getting the well-drawn background about Suzie, Mor and Joey. And the EPIC sex in the middle of the story was scorching!

Like very much how you move us through/around your storyline — this intriguing, intensely erotic romance. This piece like the others flowed effortlessly.

Greatly enjoyed the entire flashback series, four parts so far. The humor, pacing, dialogue, solid characters, the present-flashback mix, so many good things that keep repeat reads just as much a treat as when I first read it. Looking forward to the next installment! Good job!

Always enjoy reading your stories. Ummm this one was very hot. Plus just good all around, but also h o t. :)

Thank you so much! You have all been so nice to a first-time LE writer! <3

I’ve got to say, proseinagarden, you’re a f***ing wizard… WOW, Mor and Suzie feel so *real*, wonderful character development, consistent voice and behaviors, just sublime. 10/10 Story/series.