All Comments on 'Petite and the Beast Pt. 04'

Good concept but the writing needs to be more descriptive and emotional to hold a reader's attention. Unless all you are going for is a stroke story. And... Why do so many writers make each short page a Chapter?

I read 13" cock and burst into laughter. You are a special kind of stupid. Where are negative ratings when so desperately needed?

To Anonymous No.1, I am glad you still have the capacity for laughter given your bitter demeanor. But, thank you for thinking me special. To anonymous No.2 , this is the climax scene, so on its own it is pretty much just sex. I guess this chapter is necessarily a "stroke story"/scene for this reason. But , I do hear you, I do like a story with a bit of character development, but I just don't have the time...talent!!

Hey, Highonhope -- welcome to Literotica, Thanks for jumping in with such a hot little series of stories. Don't let the critics get you down. Sure, you can work on fine-tuning your syntax, or more character development if you want to, Or just have fun. You had some really arousing and original turns of phrases in there. Sometimes I want to read Tolstoy, sometimes I like Pulp Fiction. I found this primal and fun.

Hot. Good continuation of storyline. it isn't Shakespeare, but it isn't barroom bragging either. Good for what it does. DWH