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by MgSO4
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Anonymousover 4 years agoSuddenly it all happened suddenly.
It felt as though every tenth word was 'suddenly'. In the earlier chapters too. Not a bad story at all, but you really could do with an editor.
MgSO4over 4 years agoAuthorReply
Yes, I agree, but I didn't want to put then and then this happened, or next and next.
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