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BUT... where is Loving Wife?

WHY do you put SHITHE like this in LW section?

Anybody who is not mentally ill can see that this is in a wrong section!

Everybody may be thinking that above words fit you well. -1

These cretins are still giggling. Nothing else of interest here.

Hate to say this but this story is on its last legs I’m sorry to say this but this story it’s dead . The story is now waving the white flag you need to just give up on it and move on . It’s like trying to get blood out of a stone readers are just leaving it alone. The story has got no imagination or creativity nothing the story just feels like it’s just been quickly written not been checked or nothing. You need to step back and rethink just slow down you need to “ find yourself “ so to speak. When writing stories you get to a point where they need to refresh there batteries so to speak. So if they have been writing series stories they just step back and just write a something different. Sometimes they write just a short story to “ stretch there minds “ in other words stretch there legs or go for a walk do you understand. They write odd stories about anything to stop there mind from turning into mush . You need to go try something different and go have some fun with a different category. Do you understand what I’m trying to say you need to leave this story and just go try something different. When I went though your story it was clear that your mind is screaming at you to go try different things. You have got loads of different ideas in the waiting but you have got to put this story down. And go try something different . You have got the group category or the voyeur category you have got to go and explore and go stretch your imagination and creativity to there limits just leave the safety of the loving wife category. Ok