All Comments on 'Puma Sessions Ch. 07'

I really don’t know what to say. But you have got to be the biggest fool going you have just admitted that you want to turn this into a novel . Now I’ve got no problems with that it’s your story. But the reason I have to call you a complete muppet and I’m trying to be polite so sorry if you take offence to fool or muppet. But you have openly said you want to turn this into a novel . So WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU PUT THESE STORIES INTO THE LOVING WIFE CATEGORY !!!. This site has a novel category so all of these stories should have been put into the novel category. So now you know why I’m calling you a fool/muppet. But the more you write stories like this in the loving wife category the more it just builds up the haters . So I’m not sure what you want to do but if you continue this in the wrong category the more people you are going to offend . Unless you want to pull your stories and retitled them and put them in the correct category then I wish you well and success. But what ever you choose please and I mean please don’t continue this story in the loving wife category the story will not sit properly with the loving wife category readers. Especially when you just admitted that it’s supposed to be a novel story. So please just take a time out and think of your next step . Remember novels don’t get on well in the loving wife category that is why they have there own category. I do know one thing though you have a great opportunity to show off your talent in the novel category. But also remember don’t be hardheaded and ignore the advice you have admitted that you want to turn this into a novel well here is your chance to show off what you can do the only thing what is stopping you is you. All you have to do is move the story to the novel category and go spread your wings and have fun and show people what you can do. I do know another thing that there are some fantastic writers in the novel category and if you ever get stuck you have got a load of huge talent that can easily help you . Ok

But not as entertaining.

Previously you said her kids come first and yet she is cheating them by being with another man all day and night. So clearly you lied. As the author, you are responsible for everything they say and do. Now Jack has seemingly flicked countless women and all the do is rave about him. No one is angry or hurt and no marriages or families have been damaged by their affairs.

BULLSHIT!

You want to tell us kids don’t know that mommy and daddy aren’t together or that divorce is easy and painless? Or that being a single mom is worth being treated like a bitch up to and including tattoos and piercings? You think a woman is going to stay with her husband after telling her boyfriend she loves him and marks herself for him? That her husband is going to accept being in third place?

Dude, you can write a good story but all these people are simply caricatures of people. People get tired. They get sore. They get embarrassed....but in your story there are no consequences to any actions.

I’m not talking about the BTB crowd, I’m talking about that moment where your husband texts you from outside your lovers house with your children in tow and you wake up to the reality of your actions....or the other way when your husband comes home to an empty house and a process server meets him outside and he is blindsided by the fact he didn’t see this coming.

You want to make this a novel? Then flesh out your cardboard cutouts, don’t feed us shit.

Disappointing

Old bitches still giggling. You are a simpleton.