All Comments on 'Puma Sessions Ch. 10'

It hasn't aged well. And I have to tell you no one is going back to read all 9 previous chapters. The scores have been channeling down and this is the worst chapter yet. Give it a rest.

1 star

a whore job for this exemplary woman and mother would go wonderfully.

she already has the skills.

Not well done at all. I suggest you proofread your 'finished' story a couple of times. Might avoid a few of the glitches. It would also help if you bought a few more commas for use in compound sentenced. Since this 'chapter' was published on its own, it was very hard to follow when 2 boys show up out of the blue in the cab and we hear her hubby just left the cruise with no words of explanation.

It’s not turning into a novel, it’s a series of one pages vignettes that are disjointed and non sensical.

Stories where every major character is unlikable are NOT entertaining.

Well, at least the old whore stopped giggling since the last forgettable chapter. Another National Geographic story about worn out , old female predators.

A puma is just a whore with less grey hair than the cougar.